It was a normal day for Pirate Patch and he's 2 trouble makers called Minnie and Magy. Pirate Patch,baby Minnie and baby Magy were umpalumpas that lived on a sunflower . Baby Minnie and baby Magy were crawling around as usual,when Minnie and Magy sped into Pirate Patch's leg and he fell flat on his face. when he got up he told them off. After that there was no problems for the rest of the day.
The next day Pirate Patch was making breakfast,when Magy and Minnie came running in and they both yelled together ''Please can we have some milk''. Pirate Patch said in a calm voice ''OK''. When Minnie had finished her milk,she jumped off her seat to get toast when... she ran so fast into Pirate Patch that Pirate Patch's eye flew up in the air and landed in Magy's milk. ''aahh, yucky''Magy screamed. Toweled over and grabed the eye and quickly in fast forward mode,got Magy a new milk,then ran off with the eye . when she got outside she fell over a mole hole and the eye flew and flew and flew into the end of a petal. unfortunately if you climbed onto this petal you would fall for a long drop. so pirate patch was fuming !! In a sad voice he said ''I need a PATCH!!! so that day Pirate Patch went looking for a new patch for where his eye should be. that's why all pirate's in the world wear patches
I really enjoyed reading your narrative, Freya! You have thought of a very creative idea for your story, and the words you have chosen are interesting and descriptive. Great job!!
I loved this story Freya. Poor Old Pirate Patch losing his eye like that,excellent idea. Sooo the mystery of why Pirates wear Patches is all cleared up for me. I will make sure to pass it on. Well done I am very proud of you. Tania
It was just another ordinary Tuesday night. Prue Therox was at her miserable job at Melandy’s fish and chips shop wating for her next customer and cleaning up dishes. All her customers were reading old newspapers and magazines. Prue didn't like her job but needed the money because she was saving up for the most amazing pair of shoes at Kelleys shoes. Pure hated her uniform too, it was a hair net and an apron.
The door slowly opened and it sounded a bit louder than normal. It made Prue jump, but it was just another ordinary customer.
She went to take his order, '' What do you want today'' asked Prue. The customer replied with '' 2 fish, 3 crab sticks and 1/2 scoop of chips.'' “Ok what-ever, that will be 5.20,” said Prue. The customer went and sat down. But Prue realised the gun he had in his back pocket. It was not hard to miss because it was black, fat and sticking out of his back pocket. Prue started to realise he wasn't a normal customer, but tried not to show her fear of him. He had a long jacket and a big hat covering his face. In the back ground on the radio Prue heard ‘‘BREAKING NEWS, man robbed Kelly’s shoe shop.’‘ Prue stopped what she was doing and kept listening. ’‘Last seen heading to Melandy’s fish and chips shop . Do not approach, may have a gun.” She turned to look at her customers curiously . All the rest of her customers where leaving. Suddenly her customer ran and sprang over the bench, through the kitchen out the back door bellowing “don’t tell anyone or else.” As he shot out the back door, the were police were ready with hand cuffs and police cars. Prue slowly walked out very relieved that they had caught him. She headed back inside as they took the scumbag to the police station.
It was a normal day for Pirate Patch and he's 2 trouble makers called Minnie and Magy. Pirate Patch,baby Minnie and baby Magy were umpalumpas that lived on a sunflower . Baby Minnie and baby Magy were crawling around as usual,when Minnie and Magy sped into Pirate Patch's leg and he fell flat on his face. when he got up he told them off. After that there was no problems for the rest of the day.
ReplyDeleteThe next day Pirate Patch was making breakfast,when Magy and Minnie came running in and they both yelled together ''Please can we have some milk''. Pirate Patch said in a calm voice ''OK''. When Minnie had finished her milk,she jumped off her seat to get toast when...
she ran so fast into Pirate Patch that Pirate Patch's eye flew up in the air and landed in Magy's milk. ''aahh, yucky''Magy screamed. Toweled over and grabed the eye and quickly in fast forward mode,got Magy a new milk,then ran off with the eye . when she got outside she fell over a mole hole and the eye flew and flew and flew into the end of a petal. unfortunately if you climbed onto this petal you would fall for a long drop. so pirate patch was fuming !! In a sad voice he said ''I need a PATCH!!! so that day Pirate Patch went looking for a new patch for where his eye should be. that's why all pirate's in the world wear patches
by Freya
I really enjoyed reading your narrative, Freya! You have thought of a very creative idea for your story, and the words you have chosen are interesting and descriptive. Great job!!
ReplyDeleteMiss Davidson
Awesome Story Freya! I always wandered why pirates wear patches.
ReplyDeleteWendy
I loved this story Freya.
ReplyDeletePoor Old Pirate Patch losing his eye like that,excellent idea. Sooo the mystery of why Pirates wear Patches is all cleared up for me. I will make sure to pass it on.
Well done I am very proud of you.
Tania
It was just another ordinary Tuesday night. Prue Therox was at her miserable job at Melandy’s fish and chips shop wating for her next customer and cleaning up dishes. All her customers were reading old newspapers and magazines. Prue didn't like her job but needed the money because she was saving up for the most amazing pair of shoes at Kelleys shoes. Pure hated her uniform too, it was a hair net and an apron.
ReplyDeleteThe door slowly opened and it sounded a bit louder than normal. It made Prue jump, but it was just another ordinary customer.
She went to take his order, '' What do you want today'' asked Prue. The customer replied with '' 2 fish, 3 crab sticks and 1/2 scoop of chips.'' “Ok what-ever, that will be 5.20,” said Prue. The customer went and sat down. But Prue realised the gun he had in his back pocket. It was not hard to miss because it was black, fat and sticking out of his back pocket. Prue started to realise he wasn't a normal customer, but tried not to show her fear of him. He had a long jacket and a big hat covering his face. In the back ground on the radio Prue heard ‘‘BREAKING NEWS, man robbed Kelly’s shoe shop.’‘ Prue stopped what she was doing and kept listening. ’‘Last seen heading to Melandy’s fish and chips shop . Do not approach, may have a gun.” She turned to look at her customers curiously . All the rest of her customers where leaving. Suddenly her customer ran and sprang over the bench, through the kitchen out the back door bellowing “don’t tell anyone or else.” As he shot out the back door, the were police were ready with hand cuffs and police cars. Prue slowly walked out very relieved that they had caught him. She headed back inside as they took the scumbag to the police station.
By Zarnia
Hi Freya,
ReplyDeleteWe loved your story.
Keep up the good work.
Grandma & Grandad
xxXxx
Brilliant work Freya, man was she lucky she saw that gun and even luckier the police got him. Proud of you Freya xx
ReplyDeleteLove Tania